Potent...
Well done with the overloop, just that at first and a good drumline. I think with a bit of patience you can make this a background loop of a bigger/longer song.
If you do it that way you can also add more instruments, or whatever...
The only drawbacks are that it does sound too chaotic and the song is slightly too fast. How about removing one or two instruments, or make the drums less active?
Anyway, I'm moving onto your next songs, I'll be reviewing two more.
Good job, keep making music, it sounds good.!