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Summer Holiday and a new part of the story

Posted by MaartenC - June 22nd, 2012


Hello everyone reading,

UPDATE: It's finally known where I'll be heading the next three weeks; Turkey. In that way, I'll have a new Continent to add to my list, namely Asia (that is, when we head to Eastern Turkey). I'll upload a new pic, by the way.

UPDATE2: I've been interviewed by TheDark: linky
Gotta say, the dude asks good questions.

This will probably be my newspost for the rest of summer, since holidays, 'n shit. I'm (of course) very happy that all (but one) tests have been completed and I finally get to do what I'm good at: nothing.

I fucking deserved it.

Anyway, since you'll be totally lost without me, I'll leave a little present, namely the continuation and ending of my previous story (and yes, I love to end shit with 'let's go' or 'let's head back').
Again, names have been altered and shit, and I am planning to revise it if it contains flaws. PLEASE POINT THEM OUT!!!
The story's not as long as the previous, about 3-4 A5-sized pages, but if you want to read it, read the previous part.

Also, this part of the story contains small-semi large spoilers, since a kinda important fact is told to Jonah (no, not you, smartass. Are you even on these days?)

Anyway, here's the text:

We walked into the tunnel and Jonah sat me down against a wall. We decided not to head in too far, since I was wounded and had to remain as still as possible. My shoulder was hurt pretty bad and I had difficulties moving it, but other than that, I was fine. Although Jonah was looking kinda worried, he found that just a bandage would do. Now that everything calmed down, I realized it hurt a lot, and even though it hurt, I was content. I was able to defeat a tough adversary without resorting to my power. I did have help, but I felt happy.
A thought entered my mind, about what I would have done if the fight had continued for any longer without Jonah interrupting, but I quickly dismissed it. I survived and that's what mattered.

'Why are you smiling, idiot?'
'What do you think? I tota... we totally won, man!' Jonah stared straight at me. 'CAD, I killed someone.'
I frowned. 'It's part of the job, Jonah. You did what you had to do, not to take a life, but save mine.'
Jonah's expression loosened a bit, but it was still stiff. I guess the adrenaline's effects had lessened already.
'I still can't quite understand how you could remain so calm during such a fight, I mean to the death. You didn't even look scared one bit when you were fighting Viktor, not even when you were laying on the floor. I... how?'
I closed my eyes too long to make a blink. It was perhaps time that Jonah knew. I said 'Jonah, I've been in these kind of fights longer. I've killed before too, and a lot. I've seen many battlefields before this, and I know what it's like to have your life flash before you, that's why I didn't freeze up.'
Jonah didn't say anything after that, and a long silence fell.
'I might tell you more later,' I said to break the silence. 'but now I really want to sleep for a while. I'm dead tired.' Jonah nodded. 'Please wake me up when the fire's out. I really long for my bed right now.'
I was already starting to feel dizzy, because I probably lost quite a lot of blood already.
Jonah sniffed and wished me a good sleep. He told me he was going to guard the tunnel.

When I woke up, daylight was already filling up our shelter. Jonah was, sitting with his back faced towards me, a few meters away from me, looking at the exit. When I got up, I realized my shoulder hadn't healed as well as I had hoped, but at least my arm could move again.
'The fire's out, by the way.' Jonah said. 'Excellent news! Shall we head back then?' Jonah nodded. I had just picked up my swords, when Jonah said 'Wait.'
I sat down again and looked at him. 'Yes?' I did some thinking, about yesterday.' He paused. 'I did not really expect it, and looking back, I shouldn't really be surprised. I mean, your first mission was already flawlessly completed...' I immediately burst out in laughing.
'Oh, god. I didn't do shit there, Jonah. I observed and noted down, other than that I just excelled in running. This is the first time for me in practically ages I've fought like this.'
Jonah looked up and clicked his tongue. 'You know? What I wanted to say was, that I am indeed shocked by what you told me, but you've been helping me... accept my situation and my life here. Even though you may have done some bad shit in the past, I know that who you are presently is cool.'
'Glad to hear that. Now let's head back. I'd like to have
my arm looked at.'

END OF THE STORY. WON'T BE FUCKING CONTINUED.

Enjoy your summer!
And of course, how did you like it?

Pic unrelated.

Summer Holiday and a new part of the story


Comments

Great story, and still feel weird that you using me as a character.
Anyway, have a fun summer!
It's all wet and rainy here. ._.

Yeah, if the full story come out, I'm sure you'll feel even more awkward, since the name I use there will always be Jonah for you...

As usual, I have no time to read.

Fuck you and your addiction for producing.

=)

Love to see you in anger.

Also, I agree with Avi: Twilight Sparkle IS cute. Admit it.

Eh, I ain't even mad.

Also, I shan't agree with you, since I haven't watched a single episode of MLP.

Just WATCH MLP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I swear you will like it...slowly. =D

Nope.

Just do it.

Nope.

lol damn summer holidays :P
I yet again will not read the story now, I have to read it later (clock's freakin' 3 am as I write this :S)

Allrighty then.

lol, I managed to read Amaranthus' story; I MIGHT be able to read yours soon (have dinner right now).

Aight. You go do that. Meanwhile, I'm busy writing chapter 16, inspiration is flowing again.

k

You know, you might want to re-write your entire novel after it's finished (for about 5 times in the least).

I know, yes, though the story shouldn't be even at half by now.

Cool story, bro.

Fucking swords, aw yeah. But hey, it doesn't include massive fantasy elements. Maybe put some of that inside? Or should the story be realistic? =P

I'm not going to include major fantasy elements. The only thing that's unrealistic is the whole city-state thing and the powers.

WHEN WILL YOU FUCKING REVIEW RAINBOW 19.

Hahaha...

I'm serious.

No, I'll be reviewing it before I leave, promise. Though atm I don't really feel like doing anything.

Do it before Wednesday, plz.

kk.

Great story so far Maarten.Well done

You read the previous part too?

Thanks for the compliment!

Not bad. Much shorter than the previous ones though.

But of course, this is the continuation and ending of the previous story. Thanks for the feedback!

Who the fuck wrote that article in that pic?

Kurt Westervelt, apparently.

Germany has dissapointed me once again.

Yeap. Me too. Though the good thing is that I can watch the match 100% neutral.

Spain VS Italy

I'm going for Spain.

There's indeed a good chance that Spain will win.

I'm actually hoping for at least 10 yellow cards; those are the fun games.

And 4 red cards, all going to Italy. =3

Nice.

Oh yea, Barotelli won't be playing in the finals.

Nope, they removed him from the game just in time, so he'll probably be playing.

He got a yellow card after taking off his shirt, and that means he'll be missing the next match (which is the finals).

Nope, he didn't miss the finals; in your face.

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