:D I got credited! I feel absolutely fabulous right now, one of the few moments in my life that I have that.
Anyway, I'll be splitting this review in two parts, the first half of the song and (of course) the second half.
-The first half- (I'll get straight to the point, seeing you can handle a bit of criticism)
The effect used in the first seconds is a good add, but 10 seconds for that...? Seems a bit too long. 4 or 5 seconds should be enough. Also, you should let the instruments kick in while that effect is still active, like you did at 0:25.
Anyway, the intro with the bells and the (god I need to learn those instruments) epic-sounding instrument sounded good. It fits well with an intro. The only thing (minor) about that is when the effect, mentioned in the previous paragraph, kicks in, those instruments stop too suddenly.
This was actually the only thing that bothered me in the first half, apart from the effect spamming, which isn't THAT bad, but well... Some people can't stand such things :(
The good things were the other instruments used and the changes in 'swing'. The instruments used were good, very good. The sounded quite eastern and the swing put into that they mostly have. They made the song less (or even almost not) repetitive. Great job.
-The second half-
I see the song from 2:11 on as the second half, where the song did get slightly repetitive. All the transitions were good, but it did seem as if the song was slowly shifting from 'Hm! Impressive!' to 'Mwahh... Meh'.
The instruments were still great and the swing too, but then another effect, and the song started over again.
The end: at 3:41 the song started to end, from which the transition was done well and the ending was good. It's not something I hear often, so I was surprised. The song didn't 'die' out, but calmly ended. Those two are close to each other, but (meh I'll stop here, I'm rambling).
Anyway, You get 3 stars from me, 2,5 for the song itself (I'm stricter than usual with this one) and ,5 for potential. I hope you can use this information and someday make a fixed version!
Keep it up, voted 4/5 by the way.